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I staggered,
Wrapping myself inside my invisible cloak,
Struggling through the buffeting wind,
Sharp raindrops burning my eyes.

Well-intentioned, thoughtless,
Sharp blades piercing the soul,
If only I could hide from those words,
I'm sorry.
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Gamerpanda Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job. I like how it's so succinct, yet full of imagery! Good work!
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!! :D
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Sleep-Flower Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008
:smooch:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:blush:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Even though they meant well, I know it hurt. I'm sorry. :tears:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
It's all right... It was a long, long time ago... a different world. Somehow that imagery has always been there, in my memories, but it wasn't till .. I don't know, I guess you could say you inspired the expressing of it... :hug:

And for the record, even to this day I still cringe just a little when I hear it said... :-) I am actually happy now - this isn't a sign of sadness, just an expression of something that's been there for a long time.
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes, it helps to get it on paper. Glad you're not sad. :cuddle:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:-)
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sweetp409 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008
just one word
Powerful
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. :hug:
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Buble Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It'svery piognant.. not written for any special circumstance or meaning? just off the cuff ? whatever the reason... good to see you write again :hug:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
my latest journal (if dA quits timing out long enough to read it)... explains it a little bit... :hug:

Thanks!
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Buble Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:wow: :jawdrop: You sure know how to surpise a gal! thanks dear J :heart: I think you really outdid yourself in this one.... thanks so very much for such a sweet gesture!!! You know I appreciate it very much!!! happy for Angela too.. your ''new'' friend I have to visit as yet.... now I understand the poem too btw :blowkiss: big // nah.. huge hug to Kate (and you!!) :smooch:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
I sent you a note, too.. :hug:
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Buble Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Im so thankful for that too!!! (havent been able to get on DA) .................. even now it's not doing right.. so Im off to bed :smooch: will try again tomorrow :love: :hug:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug: Sleep well! :D
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Buble Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I dind thank goodness .... hope you (are) did too :nod: :hug:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Too well!! It was hard getting up this morning!!
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resada Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008
WOW!!!This is so cool!
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you... :)
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