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I staggered,
Wrapping myself inside my invisible cloak,
Struggling through the buffeting wind,
Sharp raindrops burning my eyes.

Well-intentioned, thoughtless,
Sharp blades piercing the soul,
If only I could hide from those words,
I'm sorry.
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Gamerpanda Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job. I like how it's so succinct, yet full of imagery! Good work!
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!! :D
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Sleep-Flower Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008
:smooch:
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:iconarkansawyer:
arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:blush:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Even though they meant well, I know it hurt. I'm sorry. :tears:
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arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
It's all right... It was a long, long time ago... a different world. Somehow that imagery has always been there, in my memories, but it wasn't till .. I don't know, I guess you could say you inspired the expressing of it... :hug:

And for the record, even to this day I still cringe just a little when I hear it said... :-) I am actually happy now - this isn't a sign of sadness, just an expression of something that's been there for a long time.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes, it helps to get it on paper. Glad you're not sad. :cuddle:
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:iconarkansawyer:
arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:-)
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sweetp409 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008
just one word
Powerful
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:iconarkansawyer:
arkansawyer Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. :hug:
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